Comments on: mail order groom up for grabs

By: Resa

Resa — Wed, 10 Sep 2008 16:55:37 +0000

Yea, well I’m just looking for a mail order groom, but I think what I am looking for.I’m not going to find.Looking for a spiritually discliplined clean male.Who knows his place is to be provider.Celabate is a must,who needs to know he will never sleep in my bed.Who loves intelligable conversation, submissive, kind, and knows he must work like a man should, honest, values, and know and apreciate in return.I will serve great meals, do all house needs as clothes shopping,ect.(no materialism)and is willing to pay for ym atificail insemintion of many races.And that he is for me, and I am for my children and not him.Though he will be treated of great vlaue and respect.Just as long as he knows his place.

By: Traci

Traci — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 16:34:19 +0000

I read it late, but it sure sounded like poisoning was coming up to me too. : ) How disturbing that it really happened.

but happy news on the ice-cream and cervix front!

By: bon

bon — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 01:10:51 +0000

yay for Awake and her clever husband, and for Anta! come visit, i’ll buy you all a Blizzard or brazier treat.

and thanks to all for the feedback. new complete version – with slight departures from original – will be posted when we get home. bait yer breath.

we’re over in Nova Scotia celebrating cousin Angus’ second birthday with wagon rides and much wildness. love to all.

By: Anta

Anta — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 21:48:45 +0000

Island_Journalist – Sherlock Holmes and I had it going on in my past life, don’t you know? So the credit’s all his.

As for the mail order groom, if this *is* the backstory, I do believe that it’s the Cherry Blizzard that’s up for grabs, isn’t it? I’ll pass it on to Awake’s husband without any problems as he did come up with the idea first..oh and I’m lactose intolerant anyway. Bon could always just mail me “pancakes” if she really feels obliged…soy milk please! Of course there would be a poisoning of sorts going on there too because they’d take a while to get to my neck of the woods.

I’m eagerly awaiting to read how Bon puts together the ending of this story… is a surprise family breakfast, with the dad possibly hitting on the counsellor who later shows up, and everyone living happily ever after out of the question?

By: Island_Journalist

Island_Journalist — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 19:34:08 +0000

Anta – your research skills [handclapping, cheering]

My research skills [crickets chirping, a west wind blows through the birch leaves]

Well done!

Of course, to be fair, I think the mail order groom must be awarded to Awake’s husband, since he came up with the scenario first.

I anxiously await part II. Great writing, Bon. You had me at “He couldn’t say he hadn’t been warned.”

By: jen

jen — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 17:40:11 +0000

this makes me so happy. the ice cream love and the cervix both. well done, cervix.

By: cinnamon gurl

cinnamon gurl — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 11:39:14 +0000

Ooh, looks like Anta’s on to something.

By the way, I did feel like it was kind of complete as is. Even though I was left wondering…

By: Anta

Anta — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 11:34:28 +0000

VICTIM, 47 – treated and released from hospital
Suspect, 14 – charged with attempted murder
Wilmington, Delaware
Teen accused of poisoning father’s pancakes — (Nando Times) Police said the 14-year-old told a counselor at her school Friday about her plans to poison her father’s breakfast. The counselor alerted the teen’s father, but the man didn’t heed the warning and ate the pancakes Saturday.

If this is the backstory, I feel like when you’re watching a movie and that really annoying person who has seen it wrecks its for everyone by telling the ending. Ok that, and 3 posts on the same blog in the space of about 30 minutes is making me hate pancakes right now!

By: Anta

Anta — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 11:17:08 +0000

hmmm didn’t realise you need to sign up to access the above link I posted so the best I’ve got is “Her father, 46-year-old Timothy, confessed to raping her after threatening to cut her hair when she wouldn’t behave herself.” Am I on the right track?? See? you do have us dying to know!
Oh and LOL @ island journalist!

By: Anta

Anta — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 11:05:35 +0000

Ok Bon could this have something to do with it? http://www.encyclopedia.com/doc/1P2-6837844.html
You wanted feedback and the only thing I can say is that (apart from the sperb writing style) if your intent was to keep your readers guessing (and pulling their hair out about what happens next!)…intent achieved!

Im so glad your cervix is hanging in there. A little more to go…every day that passes is a giant step and you’re doing a fantastic job. I’m sure those blizzards have something to do with it….the baby’s saying “if it’s that cold out there, I think I’m gonna stay put for a little while longer in here.”